From 46321de968bc76321161ddff1d2ce39028b3815d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Jeffrey Burdges <burdges@gnunet.org>
Date: Tue, 30 May 2017 10:26:20 +0200
Subject: Slightly more

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 doc/paper/taler.tex | 5 +++--
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@@ -1304,8 +1304,9 @@ it to use the linking protocol to cheat other users.
 Although this claim holds broadly, one could envision violating it
 with advanced forms of Digital Restrictions Management (DRM) that
 exploited trusted code execution.  We discount this threat as being
-similar to the withdrawal loophole, but we recommend that hardware
-DRM be outlawed for posing a threat to the state's tax base.
+similar to the withdrawal loophole in that participating users must
+trust hostile software, but we recommend that hardware DRM be
+outlawed for posing a threat to the state's tax base.
 % along with more serious concerns. %\cite RMS or EFF or ??
 
 \begin{corollary}
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