From bce835d2ce0172bffa2858eaba21a6c6c3723110 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Pieter Wuille <pieter.wuille@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 15 Mar 2016 16:29:24 +0100
Subject: Small improvements to BIP0009

---
 bip-0009.mediawiki | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

(limited to 'bip-0009.mediawiki')

diff --git a/bip-0009.mediawiki b/bip-0009.mediawiki
index 83ce7d0..509a8a9 100644
--- a/bip-0009.mediawiki
+++ b/bip-0009.mediawiki
@@ -33,11 +33,11 @@ Each soft fork deployment is specified by the following per-chain parameters (fu
 The following guidelines are suggested for selecting these parameters for a soft fork:
 
 # '''bit''' should be selected such that no two concurrent softforks use the same bit.
-# '''starttime''' should be set to some date in the future, approximately one month software release date including the soft fork.  This allows for some release delays, while preventing triggers as a result of parties running pre-release software.
+# '''starttime''' should be set to some date in the future, approximately one month after a software release date including the soft fork.  This allows for some release delays, while preventing triggers as a result of parties running pre-release software.
 # '''timeout''' should be 1 year (31536000 seconds) after starttime.
 
 A later deployment using the same bit is possible as long as the starttime is after the previous one's
-timeout or activation, though it is recommended to have a pause in between to detect buggy software.
+timeout or activation, but it is discouraged until necessary, and even then recommended to have a pause in between to detect buggy software.
 
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