From 438bb6bbab2822b1a093957b006f9f109b8a13e0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Luke Dashjr <luke-jr+git@utopios.org>
Date: Fri, 5 Feb 2016 00:22:05 +0000
Subject: bip-0002: Be more specific on how additional comments forums can be
 specified

---
 bip-0002.mediawiki | 5 +++--
 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

(limited to 'bip-0002.mediawiki')

diff --git a/bip-0002.mediawiki b/bip-0002.mediawiki
index 4d3bab0..2558f20 100644
--- a/bip-0002.mediawiki
+++ b/bip-0002.mediawiki
@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ Some BIPs receive exposure outside the development community prior to completion
 
 Pages must be named after the full BIP number (eg, "BIP 0001") and placed in the "BIP Comments" namespace. For example, the link for BIP 1 will be https://en.bitcoin.it/wiki/BIP_Comments:BIP_0001 .
 
-In order to avoid possible abuse of Bitcoin Wiki moderation, BIPs may also choose to list a second forum for BIP comments.
+In order to avoid possible abuse of Bitcoin Wiki moderation, BIPs may choose to list a second forum for BIP comments, in addition to the Bitcoin Wiki. In this case, the second forum's URI should be listed below the Bitcoin Wiki's URI.
 
 Summary tones may be chosen from the following, but this BIP does not intend to cover all possible nuances:
 
@@ -112,10 +112,11 @@ Summary tones may be chosen from the following, but this BIP does not intend to
 * Mostly Recommended for implementation, with some Discouragement
 * Mostly Discouraged for implementation, with some Recommendation
 
-For example, the preamble to BIP 1 would be updated to include the (markup) line:
+For example, the preamble to BIP 1 might be updated to include the line:
 
     Comments-Summary: No comments yet.
     Comments-URI: https://en.bitcoin.it/wiki/BIP_Comments:BIP_0001
+                  https://some-other-wiki.org/BIP_1_Comments
 
 To avoid doubt: comments and status are unrelated metrics to judge a BIP, and neither should be directly influencing the other.
 
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